Improvedname - VOX IS POX

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Improvedname - VOX IS POX

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Discord name: Hyena#6830


Byond ckey: Improvedname

Job/Races you are applying for: Vox

Name of the character you intend to be using: Kiyakitika

Summarize the species. As evidence that you've looked into it:Vox reptile-like species, that breathes phoron and have purple blood, they also have an special organ called the cortical stack that acts as their brain, and makes sure all other of their organs work effcienctly, they have an language called vox-pidgin which contents of loud shrieking, vox doesn't care about anything thats non-vox, ex:human etc so being racistic to them calling em, meatbags, and tajara as hairy things and other relative insulting nicknames. they also are greedy and steal things from people that isn't vox, vox doesn't steal from an vox.

In the case of applying for a species, give us a brief summary of your character's backstory. This should give us an idea that you understand the lore of the species: Kiyakitika is a engineer for the arkship "The Red Spike Quill of the Roaming Thirty-Strong Frigate of the Arkship Dubious Synergy", who got left in a raid against an NT facility, kiyakita got charged with trepassing, Piracy, grand sabotage, and has been charged with 64 years of improsonment, which NT offered the vox the choice to work for them under 24/7 survilance(tracking implant), or 64 years in a solitary cell for the crimes he done, the  vox chosen for working for NT, and NT put him in a engineer position due to his experience dissembling/assembling things.
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Beef up that background some more and answer the additional question that was added to the application questions.

That backstory was, a little bit too brief.

Edit: Allright now that looks better. I'm in favor.
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You've at least read up on their lore, and your backstory is believable in the species' context.
I'm fine with supporting this application, its up to a head admin to approve it though.

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